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Ocean of Rain, March 22 2011 @ 9:30PM by whitecat162
Here comes the rain, washing away my soul.
It gathers and builds
washing away the hills.
Here comes the ocean,
to bring me to life.
Here comes the night, to show me the light.

Here comes the dark to pull me apart
Here comes the sky to bring me to my end
Here comes the ground to bring me down.


Ocean of Rain, disguised tears
Build like a tsunami
To wash over me like a violent storm.
It whispers my secrets till I can't stand it
It's a demon no one can control
It's a demon no one knows of.

Here comes the Earth to suck me dry of mirth
Here comes the sun to burn me till I'm done
Here comes the water to crash against me till I falter.
Here comes the shadows to finish me.

Ocean of Rain, demon disguised,
Ocean of Rain, the greatest mystery.

Ocean of Rain, I know what you are.




I really have no clue why I wrote this, just a little piece of my madness Put a smile on! Hope you guys enjoy it^^
 

March 22 2011 @ 9:56PM, Response by KakaSaku_Lover1 « Ocean of Rain
holy crap dude this is awesome Put a smile on!
I wish i could write poems like this.
 

Ocean of Rain » Response by cmy376, March 23 2011 @ 4:34AM
Wow, I don't think I'll ever be able to write anything as good as that! It's so cool!
 

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