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A poem I wrote, November 20 2010 @ 10:48PM by kityiscrazed_101
I had to write a poem for school, and I thought I would post it here. It is supposed to be about someone that we haven't talked to in a while and I choose a friend that I haven't seen since 5th grade (I am in 11th now).


Tell me are you still in chorus?, do you still draw?
Tell me what you have accomplished, but also what you failed at
Tell me about your plans for the future
Tell me what you like and what you don't like
Say I miss you
Say I hate you
Say anything, something, everything
Tell me do you remember me or did you forget about me.
Tell me did I hurt you when I left without saying goodbye, or do you even care at all
Tell me do you even know I am gone
Tell me every single thing


So, Tell me what you think. Also I might post a little bit of a story I am writing. Don't copy please. Put a smile on!
 

November 21 2010 @ 2:06AM, Response by cmy376 « A poem I wrote
It's awesome! Put a smile on!
 

A poem I wrote » Response by kityiscrazed_101, November 21 2010 @ 11:42AM
Thank you!
 

November 23 2010 @ 4:58AM, Response by cmy376 « A poem I wrote
You're welcome, you are a great poet. Put a smile on!
 

A poem I wrote » Response by KakaSaku_Lover1, November 23 2010 @ 9:18PM
(here is mine i had to write today)

Tell me about how we first met.
Tell me about April Vacation when we were by the river sitting in the gazebo, laughing just the two of us.
Tell me about your passion for swords and how I almost won when you were teaching me.
Tell me about the walks we take together along the railroad tracks behind my dad's house.
Say I'll protect you.
Say Riko Tenma.
Say anything, because I love to hear your voice.
Tell me how you took care of my brother's dog Buddy after he was hit by a car.
Tell me that i can open my heart again and you won't hurt me.
Tell me about Kael.
Tell me all about it.
 

November 23 2010 @ 11:13PM, Response by linda85 « A poem I wrote
They are both good poems.
 

A poem I wrote » Response by kityiscrazed_101, November 24 2010 @ 9:07AM
Thanks. Riko I like your poem
 

November 24 2010 @ 9:23AM, Response by KakaSaku_Lover1 « A poem I wrote
It Made Kael cry happy tears last night when i read it to him.
 

A poem I wrote » Response by kityiscrazed_101, November 24 2010 @ 9:37AM
That's good that he liked it. I always liked your poems.
 

November 24 2010 @ 9:58AM, Response by KakaSaku_Lover1 « A poem I wrote
Thanks *bows playfully*
 

A poem I wrote » Response by kityiscrazed_101, November 24 2010 @ 10:15AM
haha, no problem
 

November 26 2010 @ 8:20PM, Response by cmy376 « A poem I wrote
You two are so good at writing poems! I suck at it. Put a smile on!
 

A poem I wrote » Response by kityiscrazed_101, November 26 2010 @ 8:23PM
Well, this is the only poem I wrote, I actually suck bad at writing poems. I can never think of what to write.
 

November 26 2010 @ 9:15PM, Response by cmy376 « A poem I wrote
Same! Put a smile on!
 

A poem I wrote » Response by kityiscrazed_101, November 26 2010 @ 9:16PM
Yeah. It really sucks because in English class, they want everyone to write poems. So I get help from my friend. Put a smile on!
 

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