Teeth ground together,
The sky dark forever
No happy endings ever

Eyes like hot coals
A heart of a soul
It's the devil's roll

Hands balled up into fists
Too afraid to even exist
The flames roar high with a hiss

The world turns to dust
It's inhabitants a pile of rust
The sun turns away with a sneer of disgust

When I stop and stare
I've noticed the earth's gone no where

My fists loosen and I take a breath
Waiting for another death

I close my eyes
The light saying it's good-byes

And as I wonder why
I'm left alone with me, myself and I

(What I attempted to do is make a connection with each line, for example if you read every first line it'll read Teeth ground together, eyes like hot coals Hands balled up into fists, the world turns to dust, when I stop and stare my fists loosen and i take a breath, I close my eyes and as I wonder why.... Same goes for the 2nd and 3rd lines, what I was also trying to accomplish was to have 3 different people (me,myself and I) tell a small story of their own that leads up to the end of the world. Sorry if that's too confusing, and if it is just read the poem as a whole )

Gosh. I luffles it :O


Totally luffles it.

very cleverly done What happened to 'I' in the last four paragraphs though?

The writer got lazy and didn't want to rhyme anymore, that's what happened

Great job

Awesome!