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Nothing Left, September 29 2010 @ 2:08AM by
Nothing Left
Looking up at the sky, Time ticks life away. There is nothing left. Only sanity on the fringe. A thing of pain in my heart. In my brain and in my veins. There is nothing left to give. Nothing for me. Nothing for you. The earth to me is like barren wasteland. No resources left to consume. Like a scorched book, incomprehensible. Sand in the hourglass... Another moment gone. Another life born, And another torn. But in the end there is nothing left... For me. |
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October 02 2010 @ 8:05PM, Response by
I really like it!
Especially "Another life born, and another torn" |
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Nothing Left » Response by
wow i did not think anyone would like my work.
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October 12 2010 @ 12:54AM, Response by
Thank you, is there any way I can improve?
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Nothing Left » Response by
"Time ticks life away." I love this line.
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