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Summer Nights (Poem), July 09 2010 @ 10:30PM by Fire_Ice
Summer nights
Too hot
Sweat drips
Down my neck
Making me want to vomit
I toss
I turn
I attempt
To ignore
The rolling
Of my stomach
That won't stop
And only gets worse
When i move
Even a fraction
Of an inch
The music
Lessens the pain
Lessens the sickness
That wants to escape
I want to escape
To somewhere
Where the nights
Are cooler
Where the sickness
Isn't making my stomach roll
Where the moon is
The true beauty of night
Not a sign
That the sickness of night
Isn't over yet
 

July 11 2010 @ 4:13PM, Response by cindy22 « Summer Nights (Poem)
That's another great poem, Dani. ^^
 

Summer Nights (Poem) » Response by Haileybugg, July 21 2010 @ 2:22AM
You must live somewhere where it gets really hot during summer.

So far my summer has been 60 degrees. Haha

But great poem nonetheless.
 

July 21 2010 @ 6:20PM, Response by Fire_Ice « Summer Nights (Poem)
Thanks everyone. And Hailey yeah it's been in the high 90's every day. Its only like 87 at night.
 

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