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News Crew Story Critiques, February 14 2010 @ 8:07PM by Nortara
Please let us know what you think of the stories that we've written. The CW Times is for you, so feel free to tell us if you think our grammar is atrocious, our ideas are tired, or we are unpleasant hygienically ^_^

Let me introduce you to our fabulous News Crew!

Friesianlover
Anubis_werewolf
Nortara
 

February 15 2010 @ 11:14AM, Response by buddylove « News Crew Story Critiques
I quite like the interviews, one with Santa, now Cupid, it's a very cool idea with that.

The Quibble stories Iris has made are pretty awesome as well, I like the idea of having all the stories connect in a way every month. Put a smile on!

All the grammar is excellent, as well as spelling, then there are the wonderful details that are put into the writing, such as Equifeline's story this month, "The Battle of the Gods", there was the line,


Napoleon stayed rock still on the skeleton luge, glaring defiance at the ice whipping his eyelids.
 

News Crew Story Critiques » Response by Friesianlover, February 16 2010 @ 6:50PM
equi is an artiste!! I'm honored to be among these writers! And I plan more interviews in coming issues.





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February 21 2010 @ 6:52PM, Response by PinkxRhino « News Crew Story Critiques
I'm glad that you're liking our stories and works, Buddy Put a smile on! Thank you for giving us feedback.
 

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