In my spear time, I love writing poetry. Tell me what you think. This one here is my favorite one I wrote.
In the quiet darkness all alone, I hear your voice say my name. Its as called as snow coming down. Each time i hear it a shiver passes over my pale skin.Who are you? What do you want? I ask this over and over again and never get an answer. I dont sleep and i barely eat for if i do, I hear your voice and instantily i feel sick and to afraid to close my tired eyes. Your killing me slowley, but i guess that what you want. You want me to suffer, but why? What did i ever do to you? Cant you just leave me alone and call it a day? Fine you win. Take me away. Do what you want. I give up. Im exusted and theres nothing left of me. I close my eyes and once again you have taken another innocent soul, forever.

i fixed all da words i miss spelled

ooh I like the last line Good job!^^

That was quite nice Bacibaby

Thank you cindy and whitecat