My eyes
Always seem to
Wander to you
Your smiles
Your warm eyes
The pure look of
Happiness
Though
I see through
That act
I know
I am the same way
I fake the
Smile
Sometimes the
Laugh
As well
Though
When I’m near you
My laughs and smiles
Are as real as possible
You make me happy
Like no one else
Can
Do you realize how happy you can make me?
If only
I knew
If only
You would let me
Behind the wall
That you show the world
Will I ever get past it?

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Just a little poem I wrote for someone, tell me what your thoughts are on it please.

OMG! Thats AMAZING

Really? Oh my gosh thank you so much twilight you are too sweet =]

it is. you really need to be a writer

Thanks again Twilight, and yes I do hope to be an author/poet

you will be

I hope, it will be a let down if I cannot reach my goal of becoming AT LEAST a poet

you know you can turn things in now to see if you could be. there was a girl who became a writer at age 11

Yes, I know there is a way to do that I just don't know what that way is

find addresses of publishers and send stuff in. thats what my did. he used to write.

Ah kool. I'll try that, eventually.

lol. you should. you would be great.

Haha, thanks but the question is would anyone else think that? That isn't close to me, like all the people that read my poems are

i think they would think you were amazing unless they were jerks

Very nice, Dani