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In a second, August 13 2009 @ 1:38PM by
 Fire_Ice
In a second:
In a second everything can change A car accident could kill 20 A plane crash could kill a hundred A smile could brighten someone’s day Saving them from suicide Making someone else laugh Could make them a happier person through life Moving to a different state Could make everyone around you cry Letting them miss seeing their true love walk by them Forgetting can lead to hate The ripple effect Creates new lives Destroys lives When communication in an airplane is bad Lives are gone As the plane goes down As do the hopes of loved ones of the victims So many lives Destroyed Crushed Because of one simple flaw 
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In a second » Response by
pigeonpower, August 13 2009 @ 6:49PM
It isn't my style but I'm no expert so no one can really say if something is good or not without bias. So all I can say is that in my opinion it is not one of your best
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In a second » Response by
twilight_grl, August 15 2009 @ 12:17AM
you r the best poet ever. I love it.
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August 16 2009 @ 6:35PM, Response by
PinkxRhino « In a second
Kinda dark but it makes a good point. Your poetry rocks!
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In a second » Response by
XXSkater_PrincessXX, August 26 2009 @ 3:41PM
Sounds like a fast-paced song.
Awsome.
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