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Unknowns (poem), August 10 2009 @ 12:35AM by pigeonpower
This is the best poem I wrote (in my poem in a set of six which may later appear, but for now:

Unknowns

I have always wondered
if those two hearts
intertwined
were ours,
if when I jokingly asked you
to marry me
you realized I was half way serious,
but I lost those hearts
and you
no longer wear my ring.
 

August 10 2009 @ 3:54AM, Response by Dianne1999 « Unknowns (poem)
I like it.
 

Unknowns (poem) » Response by kassidyx, August 12 2009 @ 7:14AM
its relly good
 

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