These are two new poems of mine, yea I know they are emo-ish. But they really help me feel better....so here they are tell me what you think:



My heart is made of tears
My tears are made of blood
My blood craves you
To survive
I smile like everything is fine
I laugh like everything is aline
Truly?
I’m dying inside
With every tear
Every sad word
Every expression
I die more
Closer to my final death




Will I stand life until my next birthday?
Will I allow myself to be cheerful?
Will I ever laugh and smile again?
Or will my life be an empty pit of sorrow?
Will I end up going under the water’s surface
And never come up?
Or end up tying a rope around my neck?
Could I end up carving my arms with words?
Could I end up crying myself to death?
Will I go past the line of depression?
If so will I be able to pull back?
Away from danger of killing…..
Myself?

those are the most amaziazing thing i have ever read.

Very nice. It does sound emo-ish, but that's ok. Very creative. They also have a hint of darkness lurking within them, nice.

Thank you both, there supposed to have that dark sense

The first part is wonderful, but I find the second part too cliché...

"Could I end up crying myself to death?"
=> No. Just... No. Never. So old... Either scratch it or change the wording.

Well what do you suggest I change it to?

That, my friend, is for you to discover you have to do it yourself.

Woah.Those were..wow.Amazing.You have got a lot of talent,and I can't wait to read more of your wonderful creations

Wow, thank you so very much Brooklyn I just am about to put up another poem so you can read that too. =]

Yay! I'll be posting a few of my works too.I can't wait Fire

Awesome, I put up another one just now, called Under Lock and Key

And It's amazing! Where do you come up with some of this inspiration?

Something very sad (it's sad to me at least) happened to me and it triggered my poem writting mind.

ah I see.I'm sorry for whatever happened,but it turned out to be a great creative kick start

Yes it did, and thank you. Now i think that what happend was meant happen for me to become a poet =]