I made another poem


As I lay here I think of you

And all of the wonderful things you do

And in my heart and in my eyes

I see the person you sometimes desquise

You sweet and strong and never far

And if I need you I know where you are

Through the good times and the bad

You all that I've ever had

And your all that I will ever need

And that's something I hope you see

You here in my heart and that's where you'll stay

Untill I come to the end of my days.

Wow, you may not 100% belive this but i wrote something just like that an hour or two ago...creepy. But thats really good love it

LOL That Is So Creepy....

Yea i know it sure is....But that is really awsome!

Cool poem

Heres one I wrote...well right now T.T

Can't you see me? I'm laying here crying.

Can't you see me? I'm sitting here dieing.

Or are you blind eyed?

Just staring at the sky

Not caring what happens to me

This isnt what we were soposed to be

What happend to the smiles

When they lasted for miles

And what happend to the joy I use to see in your eyes?

And what happend?
And what happend?

And where did the sun go

when all I had was rain

and where have you gone

now that all I have is pain

One things for sure,

And this I can see

Were no longer us

Were no longer we.

Just me.

Except for the grammatical errors, it's a good poem. I think it could be a song, too. I can just imagine the music video for it!

Thanks I kinda wrote it off of my emotions and it was a spur of the moment thing so I expected errors.